Wikipedia:Cleanup Taskforce/The Office

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The Office[edit]

The grammar in the opening section (and possibly later on, but I couldn't bring myself to read any further) is appalling - this is largely because of the authors' "knowing" (but inept) references to series in-jokes which have no place in an encyclopaedia article (and least not with that staggering level of stylistic ineptitude).

  • Referred to myself. · Katefan0(scribble) 16:39, May 2, 2005 (UTC)
    • Took a first crack at cleanup. Wasn't too bad. Grammar and structure problems that I fixed, some tense issues also. Shouldn't be too much left to do here. · Katefan0(scribble) 21:00, May 2, 2005 (UTC)